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Re: Bother
Hi there CheekyMonkey97. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I have to admit that I didn't really follow this poem very well. I think the ...
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Re: I Love Fruit
Hi there, Critiq. I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, this is a decent start, but I think that you still have some work to do with ...
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Re: Four Letters
Hi there icanbefixed. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I'm afraid that I don't see what your poem is about. It just seems like a ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Underwater Kiss [EDITED]
Hi there, Xirenia! I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. For a first poem, this is pretty good. The only thing that I'm not really understanding is how ...
Jan 11, 2010 -
Re: Let Me Tell You A Story About Me....
Hi there, maegardens! I'm Conrad, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, I have a hard time seeing just what this poem is trying to do. It seems ...
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Re: Your Most Faithful Friend
Hi there, singingsaturdays! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, this poem really made me chuckle at the end. It reminded me a lot of a ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Wild Horses Of The Sea [Edit]
Hi there Lydia1995. I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I really like this poem. You have such wonderful imagery here, the way you describe the breakers ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Is it real
Hi there, TeamJacob. I'm Conrad, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, I'm trying to figure out just where this poem goes. This poem is really too short ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Father
Hi there. I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I really like this poem. I love the descriptions you use, how you really let your vocabulary shine here. Never stop ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Don't you know?
Hi there. I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I don't like this poem. For one, the tone that it uses sounds very demeaning. And, if my prior experience as ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: She Used to Sing
Hi there, RoxanneDeMonica. I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I like this poem. It tells a very good story, and a very sad one at that. ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: The Never Ending Battle
Hi there 13timmy24. I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, you've got something interesting here. But, I am having a hard time seeing just what side it ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Dark Side Day
Hi there, red_helix7! I'm COnrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, when I first read this poem, the first thing I thought was, "My goodness, this is ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: A Rain Trio
Hi there starlite.isle. I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, this is an interesting thing you've got going here. I think that I might like it more ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Thy will be done!
Hi rey banzon. I'm Conrad, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, this is really not working out for me. I mean, I know other people are saying ...
Jan 9, 2010
